You can even download the first chapter for free . . . .
Well done, Gob! Although to be honest, I saw the ending coming a mile away. If you don't mind constructive criticism, I think you gave away too much in the first paragraphs. If you weave some of those facts into the story a bit later, the ending will have more punch!
“I ask no favor for my sex. All I ask of our brethren is that they take their feet off our necks.” ~ Ruth Bader Ginsburg, paraphrasing Sarah Moore Grimké
Guin, check out the offerings from M-Edge for Kindle - at Amazon and elsewhere online. They have a number of really lovely covers that integrate their booklight, which is very nice as well. The covers allow you to hold the Kindle more like a regular book (I've got one like that), or they have others that stand, so you can read hands-free.
I hope you enjoy yours as much as I'm enjoying mine. I found it to be really great to have along on vacation!
For me, it is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring.
~ Carl Sagan
Thanks BSG -- I ordered an Eco-Vue leather case that has a pocket which should fit the small LED flexible light I ordered. Both should be here next week. In the meantime, I keep on acquiring books . . . .
“I ask no favor for my sex. All I ask of our brethren is that they take their feet off our necks.” ~ Ruth Bader Ginsburg, paraphrasing Sarah Moore Grimké
Guinevere wrote:You can even download the first chapter for free . . . .
Well done, Gob! Although to be honest, I saw the ending coming a mile away. If you don't mind constructive criticism, I think you gave away too much in the first paragraphs. If you weave some of those facts into the story a bit later, the ending will have more punch!
I don't mind it at all thanks, and that's exactly the sort of critique I welcome.
Though I'm half torn between attempting a full novel, and not bothering at all.
Just in the same way as I'm half thinking about another symphony, and half thinking should I waste another three years on one...
“If you trust in yourself, and believe in your dreams, and follow your star. . . you'll still get beaten by people who spent their time working hard and learning things and weren't so lazy.”
